Also, like I said, I'm a romantic at heart, though I try really hard to stick up the other part that's a little standoffish so noone knows it. But I'm not someone who just writes it for the sake of writing it. It's got to make sense and it's got to build off of stuff. It can't just happen because I want it to. That's why the story's gone the way it has. She's built up this history and stuff. It's blatantly obvious.
I cried, "Oh, Lady Midnight, I fear that you grow old, the stars eat your body and the wind makes you cold." "If we cry now," she said, "it will just be ignored."
OK I got my new chapter up. I still look at it, and don't feel it's complete, but I wuold have had to have gone nutso overboard with the length had I kept going. So I decided to leave it open for othes to work from that place, and intergrate it into other chapters.
New Chappy up - keep in mind that I wrote everything up to the last few paragraphs before last nights Eppy. :) Um - I warned ya it was going to exude weirdness....