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My Shot at a Fan Fic


Well, I finally was convinced to give fan fic writing a try.  Don't know if this is going to be a one shot or a continuing story yet.  This begins in Season 3 of Lost and is a Skate fic.  Hope you like it.


 


 


A Reason To Survive


 


Chapter 1 - Revelations


 


They could hear what they thought was Jack being tortured by the Others.  Little did they know it was all for show.  Part of the Others' plan to break them down and make them cooperate.  Jack was hearing the same thing from his cell, thinking it was them. 


 


Kate couldn't take it any more.  She pounded on the door and screamed until she couldn't scream any more.  "Stop it!  Let him go!"  Why wouldn't they listen to her?  The last words they said to the three of them before taking Jack away were ringing in her ears.  If they wanted to live they had to cooperate.  If not, they would die.  And from the sounds of it Jack wasn't cooperating.  She already knew none of them would.  They weren't going to do whatever terrible thing the Others wanted them to do, especially if meant harm for the rest of the survivors.  She knew even Sawyer would rather die than have it be his fault that other members of the survivors died.  That's when it hit her.  This was it...they were going to die. 


 


She couldn't take it any more.  She started to cry.  She didn't want to cry, to show this weakness in front of Sawyer, but she couldn't stop.  She started to shake uncontrollably and slide down the door to the floor.  Sawyer couldn't stand to watch her pounding the door and screaming, but he didn't know what to do or how to stop her.  She wasn't going to listen to him.  But at the same time it was tearing him up inside to watch her like this.  When she started crying that was the last straw.  His heart broke for her.  He couldn't take it anymore. 


 


Without giving it a second thought he walked over and knelt next to her.  He put his hands on her shoulders and pulled her back up.  She turned to face him.  She was still crying and shaking.  It was just too much for him to watch.  He wrapped his arms around her and held her as tight as he could with his forehead resting on the top of her head and his hand running up and down her back trying to comfort her.  Kate cried until she couldn't cry any more.  He remembered the last words Tom said as he left the room dragging Jack with him.  He felt like this was the end of the line for them as well. 


 


Kate’s sobs slowly began to die away.  She felt so safe there in his arms, being held so tight.  She could get used to this she thought.  She mentally kicked herself for letting her mind even go there.  Kate tilted her head back and pulled away from Sawyer’s chest just enough so she could look at his face.  Feeling her move, Sawyer lifted his head enough to look her in the eyes.  Kate let out a small sigh.  "Sawyer, I don’t want to die," she said as the tears threatened to start up again. 


 


"You’re not gonna die Freckles," Sawyer said. 


 


"You’ve heard those screams.  There’s no telling what they’ll do to us," Kate said. 


 


Sawyer looked deep into Kate’s eyes and said, "They're not gonna hurt you Freckles, I’ll make damn sure of that."


 


Kate started to say something in reply but was cut off by Sawyer as his lips touched hers.  At first their kisses were slow and soft for comfort, but they quickly heated up to something more just like their first kiss not that long ago.  This time however, Sawyer’s hands weren’t tied behind his back and they began to roam.  Kate thought about pulling away and stopping him but she realized she didn’t want to stop him.  She realized that she had been hiding her true feelings all this time.  She really did feel something for him, a connection, a bond and she wanted to see where that connection would take them.  When she was with him, she felt like a part of her that had been missing for so long wasn’t missing any longer.   


 


As things became more frenzied, Sawyer realized where things were going and that he didn’t want things to get that far unless he knew that’s what she really wanted too.  Not just comfort or lust or trying to forget what was happening around them, but really wanted to be with him, to make love with him.  He had bedded many women before, but like Kate had told him not any exactly like her.  She was special and he knew it.  She was his equal, his other half. He had to make sure she felt the same way.  He stopped the kiss and pulled away from her just a tiny bit.  Kate looked at him questioningly, but then realized what he was thinking. 


 


Sawyer swallowed hard and then said, "Kate, is this what you really want, cause if not…"  Kate bit her lip and smiled.  She looked in his eyes and nodded her head.  That’s all the confirmation he needed.  He crushed his lips back to hers and picked her up off the floor.  They had been sleeping, in small beds on opposite sides of the room.  Sawyer gently laid Kate down on his bed and joined her there never breaking their kiss. 


 


***********


 


Sawyer stretched and froze in shock when his hand hit something.  He slowly opened his eyes and smiled as memories of the previous night returned to him.  Sawyer still couldn't believe it.  He still couldn't wrap his mind around the fact that it was Kate laying there next to him.  If he was dreaming, he didn't want to ever wake up.  He trailed his fingers down Kate's arm and she curled into him as she woke up.  She pulled the thin cover up closer around her and turned to Sawyer and smiled. 


 


"Mornin' Freckles."


 


"Morning yourself, Tex,” she smiled.


 


Kate was happy, this was where she wanted to be.  Well, not here as in with the Others, but here as in Sawyer's arms.  They both stared into each other's eyes and knew this was what they wanted.  They were each other's chance at happiness and love, each other's reason to survive.  They shared a long kiss as Sawyer pulled them both up and propped himself against the wall. 


 


"Guess we better get dressed so we can discuss a plan to find Jack and get us all the hell out of here," Sawyer said.


 


 Kate laced her fingers through his and nodded her head.  Things had changed so quickly from being so distraught that she thought it was all over to realizing how she felt for Sawyer and having a reason to keep fighting.  They had strengthened each other's will to survive.  They both knew they would make it back to the other side of the island and when they did they would be ready to explore their connection and see where it would take them.  They would have their chance at love and happiness.



-- Edited by honeypoppy0212 at 12:57, 2006-08-08

-- Edited by honeypoppy0212 at 23:02, 2006-08-24

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OMG Honey i love it! this is really good... i like how you layed it all out on the table, you really started it off in a way to get my attention! i can't wait for more i hope you upate soon!!!

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honey  that was awesome, i like how you started it, it's one of those things that i could so see happening with them. I love that he asked her first if it's what she really wanted that's cool. It's a very good foundation for a story you should continue, i could see this going lots of places



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very good H/P

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more soon please!!!!



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Southern Freckles wrote:



more soon please!!!!




I'm working on it South!   Just gotta find time to get it finished.  About half way through with the next chapter.

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honeypoppy0212 wrote:



Southern Freckles wrote:



more soon please!!!!





I'm working on it South!   Just gotta find time to get it finished.  About half way through with the next chapter.




Yay!



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Thanks to South, Fricks, Kate, Snootch, and Girlspy for reading and reviewing. 


Chapter 2 – What Light Through Yon Window Breaks


 


 


Jack didn’t want to even think about what the Others were doing to Kate and Sawyer. He had to do something. He couldn’t just sit there. He kicked at the heavy door and yelled until he began to loose his voice. He walked across the room and sank onto the bed against the wall and put his head in his hands. “This is all my fault,” Jack said out loud to himself. Why the hell did I let Michael lead us straight to the Others when I knew he was lying? Jack was still furious with himself. I thought we could keep the upper hand because we knew what was going on, but I was so wrong and now who knows what they are going to do to us. He hit the bed with his fist. His throat hurt from screaming and his head was hurting so bad he just didn’t want to think any more. He lay down on the bed and closed his eyes. He had to think of a way to get out of here and find Kate and Sawyer.


 


He must have drifted off for a minute because when he awoke he had the strange feeling that he wasn’t the only person in the room and he was being watched. Jack slowly raised his head and noticed a figure standing in the shadows on the other side of the room. “Who’s there?” he said his voice shaking. Slowly the figure came forward. She was wearing torn clothes and looked dirty and ragged like most of the Others. Her face was soft and sweet though and her hair was blonde and long. Jack suddenly realized that she physically reminded him of Sara, but he quickly pushed this to the back of his mind. “Who the hell are you and what do you want?” Jack said his voice rising.


 


She spoke in almost a whisper. “My name is Juliet and I want to help you and your friends.” Something made Jack want to believe her, but he just couldn’t, not yet.


“Why should I believe you?”


 


“Because I’m telling you the truth. I want to tell you the whole truth.”


“And just what is that?” Jack asked. And with that, Juliet began to tell him the whole story of the Others, who they were, and what they wanted.


 


**********


 


Kate and Sawyer reluctantly dressed and began discussing a plan to get Jack and themselves out of there. Neither one of them really noticed, but the whole time they discussed their escape plans they couldn’t keep their hands off of each other. Not in a sexual way, more of a reassuring, I’m "right here" way. Neither wanted to forget that the other was there. Suddenly Sawyer froze. “What’s wrong?” Kate asked.


 


“Shhhhhh, I hear something,” Sawyer said. The heavy door slowly swung open and Henry stepped inside the small room. “What the hell do you want, you son of a bitch?” Sawyer yelled. Kate placed her hand on his arm. She didn’t want him doing anything that would get himself hurt. She hoped her touch would be enough to keep him calm. That's the last thing they needed right now; for him to fly off the handle and start something. They had a plan and it would work, but they had to keep calm.


 


Henry glared at Sawyer, "Nice to see you too James."  For a second Kate was caught off guard, but then the moment she realized his name wasn't Sawyer flashed through her mind.  Somehow she thought she had heard it before, but she couldn't remember when.  She shook these thoughts off and gripped his arm harder trying to hold him back.  Sawyer relaxed a little at her touch, but still wanted to kick Henry's head in.  But he didn't want to risk Kate getting hurt, so he waited for Henry to make the next move.


 


“Where’s Jack?” Kate asked.


 


“He’s fine.  You needn’t worry about him,” Henry replied coolly. 


 


“Somehow I doubt that, Hoss,” Sawyer shot back. 


 


“Why is he not with us?” Kate said, concern filling her voice.


 


“Well, he’s the leader of your group, isn’t he?” Henry said as Sawyer rolled his eyes.  “I wanted to discuss things with him one on one.”  Henry was being truthful.  Not even Henry knew that a Juliet had snuck into Jack’s room as they were speaking.  “Now, back to the business at hand.  I know you must want to know more about us and why we want you, so let me explain a few things.”   Henry began to tell them about the Others, their history, and purpose.


 


***************


 


Jack quietly watched as Juliet left the room.  He didn’t know what to think about what she had said or if he could even believe her.  He was going to need to think about this long and hard.  He laid back on his bed and stared up at the ceiling as he began mulling over what she had told him.


 


 



-- Edited by honeypoppy0212 at 23:08, 2006-08-24

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wow honey i love this, i like how you did the Jack part and really got him there, and the reference to Juliet resembling Sarah. That was good, and then of course the Kate and Sawyer stuff was great per usual.  I like 'can't keep their hands off eachtother' stuff very cute.  I love it

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Great update Honey!!!* how Sawyer was protective was soo adorable. Your did a good job with jack! keep up the great work i am loving this fic!!!*

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that was very cool!

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This is great Honey! x

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