OK..I'm posting this to show Kala that she did a good job on this. She had to write a little story for school. Now they didn't get graded on it, but she didn't think it was very good. I told her for something that she thought up (angie helped with the editing) and wrote in less than 3 hours she did a great job. So I told her that because I liked it I would put it up in the writing section of my message board. She felt better about it then.
Mifty Bird it’s time for dinner. Okay mom. May I ask what’s for dinner? Worms, as always dear. Okay mom. Yummy my favorite Mifty thought. Mifty and his mother and sister ate dinner, and then Mifty and his sister asked if they could go play outside. Mother Bird said yes. Mifty and his sister played ball for 10 minutes, then they had to go to flying lessons. When they returned home, they went to bed. Mifty didn’t want to go to bed but his mother made him. Mifty got really mad at her and he thought she did not love him anymore. That night while he was laying in his bed, he heard something at his window . . . it was his Best Friend / Cousin T. Bird. Hey I’m running away to MN, do you want to come, asked T. Bird? Mifty said I would love to, just let me go pack. Wait said T. Bird, you don’t need to pack for where we are going. Why Mifty asked? Because we are going to Mrs. Adam’s house and she will give us everything we need. Oh okay I get it. So are you ready to go then, asked T. Bird. Yes, just let me go say goodbye to my mother and sister. NO, yelled T. Bird! Why not asked Mifty? Because they are not supposed to know. But won’t they get worried? Yes, that’s the idea. OH . . . I get it now. Okay let’s go!
T. Bird It’s getting foggy! Do you even know where we are? T. Birds . . . T. Bird . . . T. Bird where are you? This isn’t funny! T. Bird? Where are we or where am I? Ttttttt . . . Birrrrrrdddd . . . Where are you? T. Bird is that you? Hey T. Bird I think I see Mrs. Adam’s house. Wait, that is Mrs. Adam’s house. I will go there and wait for T. Bird. 20 minutes later! 12:35 A.M.!
Oh T. Bird where are you? OH! T. Bird Mrs. Adam is here (she really
isn’t there) T. BIRD THIS IS NOT FUNNY AT ALL!!!!! Is that Mrs. Adam? Or maybe its T. Bird? Who’s there? Who is that? Is that you T. Bird? T. Bird? T. Bird Mrs. Lalibirdie, Mrs. Adam, and Mr. Owen’s are here! They are actually there! But . . . they were inside Mrs. Adam’s house. Then all of a sudden . . . Mifty saw Mrs. Adam in the window watching him. He got embarrassed. He stood there for a minute then he flew away. Mrs. Adam was shocked! She was shocked because Mifty was supposed to me in O Oregon or Washington, because he was a Royal Flush bird.
Uh-Oh, were, am I going to go now? I guess I should probably go home now. My family is probably really worried about me. Uh-Oh, I think my window is locked. Yep, it is. Oh drats. I guess I have to go back in through the front door. Mifty is now safely in his bed. He wonders what happened to T. Bird. Then he hears something at his window. IT WAS T. BIRD! OH MY GOSH. T. BIRD WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? I was here waiting for you to come back. Well why did you leave me? I got scared, sorry. It’s ok.
So there it is. You can leave comments in here. I'm trying to get her to write more (just to keep her doing something other than watching TV) if she does write more I'll worry about how it posts then. Until that happens the comments being in here is just fine.
I loved it! It reads like a children's book! All she needs is an artist to do illustrations and more about Mifty! It's like Franklin, Little Bear, little animal cartoons...
I read all the dialogue on shows, and it's like reading a book.
I cried, "Oh, Lady Midnight, I fear that you grow old, the stars eat your body and the wind makes you cold." "If we cry now," she said, "it will just be ignored."
Hi Kala ! You're story was VERY cute ! Now I'm all curious about T-Bird. Why did he want to fly away ? And I'm curious about Mrs. Adams too! I think you should keep on writing!!!! :)
Kala writes very well!!!!!!
