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Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

Fan fiction Reply thread

fricksgurl75 · "you remain, my power, my pleasure my pain.."

thanks teeheee that's why i put it all in one place

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

I deleted my original fanfic thread and redid it. I wanted to get out all the jibber jabber in between, so it'd just be the story in there. And then I put the two entries together .... I'm still thinking as to what I'm doing with it. I have a general idea, but I just can't seem to get any clarification yet.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

Actually, I just wrote some new stuff in it.... well. Its going somewhere at least anyway...

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

Lion I like the new stuff alot. keep up the good work.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

hey Thanks! haha! I just did like a big rewrite of a few sections..... Gah, I'm fanatical!

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

TRAVIS IS NEW>> After a 3 month layoff he's back and as usual his day looks like it's going to be one that he doesn't have a story to tell.....Yeah right...You all know better than that. Poor frog.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

Ya, Sayids next day isn't gonna go too well either! Hahaha!! Let me go see what frogman is up to before I pass out from lack of sleep.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

So, the others are on the hunt again?????? Nice work Snootch!

I sat here till 4am again and I finished my next installment - if you can believe it. I'm quite satisfied with it actually! And I ended actualy one moment before I wanted to so that I have something to lead into for the next. ;) Enjoy!

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

Thanks Lion, and the discriptions in your story are really working for me. Great work

-- Edited by snootch2danootch at 01:12, 2006-07-26

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

Oooooo ... thanks! Please tell me you laughed just a little when Sayid got his answer?

BTW .... Group story!! WOOHOOO!!!!! Go LL! GO LL!!!!

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

LionQueen wrote:

Oooooo ... thanks! Please tell me you laughed just a little when Sayid got his answer? BTW .... Group story!! WOOHOOO!!!!! Go LL! GO LL!!!!

Sort of

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

Ya .... and the things is .... though you didn't see it coming till it was coming ..... it would have never happened had you not commented about Sawyer. Frankly most of that chapter wouldn't have happened. That took me in a whole nother direction and a better story ... so thanks!

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

LionQueen wrote:

Ya .... and the things is .... though you didn't see it coming till it was coming ..... it would have never happened had you not commented about Sawyer. Frankly most of that chapter wouldn't have happened. That took me in a whole nother direction and a better story ... so thanks!

You are very welcome. I'm always open to give my thoughts on these things. I will help anyone with this, but I just hope I don't change the story from the way you saw it before my ideas.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

Noooo, no, you enhanced it. I pretty much have an outline in my head. It's just that I get really anxious to tell the story. So much that instead of really telling it, I tend to race through it and not build and expand it. So, your insight helped me. Seemed small, I know ... but you'd be surprised!

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

I also love specific thoughts. That's good is nice to hear. But specific feedback kinda helps you write. I like to give and recieve that way. Believe me, I didn't always approach writing this way. And still I feel a little protective of my babies, but not enough to turn a deaf ear to some helpful criticism.

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

Bravo Bravo

LION!!! Another goal for the home team. Keep it up.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

You read the new one too?! heehee .... Quasimodo .... I just couldn't help it. I'm sure I remember Sawyer actually callling someone that!

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

You have really got this going well. Keep up the good work. And BTW...snowed??? Maybe, but I have an idea.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

You do, huh? Well, I kinda tried to give a little more sneaky peak too ... hehe....

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

Lion...PM in the house.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

Got it. ;)

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

Lady so cool...I had thought you'd go running off in the jungle with your lover boy

I like it alot...looking forward to the finish.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

What is it? Is it the monster? Is it "hiim"? Is it Travis? hmmmmmmmmmmm...............

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

LionQueen wrote:

What is it? Is it the monster? Is it "hiim"? Is it Travis? hmmmmmmmmmmm...............

Fricks...great work as usual.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

I was talkin about Lady's story .... what's the thing Lockes chasing??? But Yes, Fricks wrote some nice stuff:)

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

LionQueen wrote:

I was talkin about Lady's story .... what's the thing Lockes chasing??? But Yes, Fricks wrote some nice stuff:)

I know...I replied to LL already...I'm eager to learn who or what is chasing him also.

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

Lion..You continue to work this story in such a great style. Working in the show, and your own stuff. keep it up.. I really love what i'm seeing.

LionQueen · It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

Thank you - thank you verra much!

Sir Snootch · "Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

LionQueen wrote:

Thank you - thank you verra much!

You are verra welcome