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KateisLost


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ok, what sounds better?


I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, and I caught sight of a sliver of liquid gold before the sun completely disappeared behind the horizon, leaving a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red painted across the sky. I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.

or

I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, where the sun was a sliver of liquid gold as it completely disappeared behind the horizon, leaving behind a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red.I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.

or

I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, where the sun was a sliver of liquid gold, rapidly melting into the horizon. As it completely disappeared, leaving behind a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red,I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.

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I don't think I've tried the black-eyed or butterbeans.


Well, when I was a kid, my grandmother would take us out to the country to relatives who had big big big gardens and we'd [ick butter beans and black-eyed peas and sometimes bring home a watermelon or two. Snap beans and some other veggies. We'd sit in the livingroom by the tv with a bucket at our side and one in our lap and we'd shell the black-eyed peas. I never liked them so it was really funny when she'd tell us if we didn't shell them we didn't eat them. I just shelled them to see how many I could shell and to watch my fingers turn purple. giggle.gif

 



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goodnight Island! heart.gif see you later! sleep wellsleep.gif

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ok, what sounds better?


I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, and I caught sight of a sliver of liquid gold before the sun completely disappeared behind the horizon, leaving a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red painted across the sky. I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.

or

I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, where the sun was a sliver of liquid gold as it completely disappeared behind the horizon, leaving behind a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red.I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.

or

I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, where the sun was a sliver of liquid gold, rapidly melting into the horizon. As it completely disappeared, leaving behind a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red,I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.


All of them are good. I'd just leave out the horizon part since you already talked about that in the beginning of the chapter. Unless you leave this and change the first mention ...

 



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Island_Reigns wrote:

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Island_Reigns wrote:

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Artichokes make me ill. Bleh ... I've tried them hidden in dishes and I know they're there and I can taste them. I love Spinach, but can't eat spinach dip if it has artichoke. weirdface


That's like peas for me... bleh.gif



i love peas! we had them last night with steak and cous cous



Wow, you guys are eating nice dinners!


like i said last night, roommates are good for somethingbiggrin if not for them it would be ramen almost everynightweirdface

 


But I thoguht you liked to cook?

Hmm ... roommates? Multiple? I thought it was just your brother?

 



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Nighters IR:)

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KateisLost wrote:

ok, what sounds better?


I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, and I caught sight of a sliver of liquid gold before the sun completely disappeared behind the horizon, leaving a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red painted across the sky. I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.

or

I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, where the sun was a sliver of liquid gold as it completely disappeared behind the horizon, leaving behind a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red.I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.

or

I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, where the sun was a sliver of liquid gold, rapidly melting into the horizon. As it completely disappeared, leaving behind a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red,I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.


All of them are good. I'd just leave out the horizon part since you already talked about that in the beginning of the chapter. Unless you leave this and change the first mention ...


good point!

how's this?


I drained the glass of water, refilled it, and made my way to the front porch. It looked towards the west, and I caught sight of a sliver of liquid gold before the sun completely disappeared, leaving behind a brilliant canvas of pink, yellow, orange, and red painted across the sky. I found myself strangely nervous, as if some part of me was dreading the coming darkness.



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Island_Reigns wrote:
Wow, you guys are eating nice dinners!


like i said last night, roommates are good for somethingbiggrin if not for them it would be ramen almost everynightweirdface



But I thoguht you liked to cook?

Hmm ... roommates? Multiple? I thought it was just your brother?


my brother's GF is back living here again, for good this time



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LionQueen wrote:

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Island_Reigns wrote:
Wow, you guys are eating nice dinners!


like i said last night, roommates are good for somethingbiggrin if not for them it would be ramen almost everynightweirdface



But I thoguht you liked to cook?

Hmm ... roommates? Multiple? I thought it was just your brother?


my brother's GF is back living here again, for good this time

 


Really?

 



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KateisLost wrote:


LionQueen wrote:

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Island_Reigns wrote:
Wow, you guys are eating nice dinners!


like i said last night, roommates are good for somethingbiggrin if not for them it would be ramen almost everynightweirdface



But I thoguht you liked to cook?

Hmm ... roommates? Multiple? I thought it was just your brother?


my brother's GF is back living here again, for good this time



Really?


yep. my parents have got to finish their new house! i can make it through the summer with them here, but i don't think i can stand the winter



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I gotta go. I have the morning shift tomorrow ... 9am!!

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sweet dreams Lion! heart.gif see you later! aww.gif thanks again for your help on the chapter!

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ok, bed time for me tooyawn.gif goodnight everyone! bye.gif sweet dreams! aww.gif

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I cried, "Oh, Lady Midnight, I fear that you grow old, the stars eat your body and the wind makes you cold." "If we cry now," she said, "it will just be ignored."

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I cried, "Oh, Lady Midnight, I fear that you grow old, the stars eat your body and the wind makes you cold." "If we cry now," she said, "it will just be ignored."

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i hit 16K posts last night and didn't even noticehmm.gif

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have to go, Men in Trees is about to be on! be back later!smile.gif

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I cried, "Oh, Lady Midnight, I fear that you grow old, the stars eat your body and the wind makes you cold." "If we cry now," she said, "it will just be ignored."

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i hit 16K posts last night and didn't even noticehmm.gif


Of course you did!biggrin

 



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mmmmm, looks good!hungry.gif



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KateisLost wrote:

i hit 16K posts last night and didn't even noticehmm.gif


Of course you did!biggrin

did you notice last night?



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ok, i just posted chapter 5 of my vampire storysmile.gif

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and thanks again Lion for your help on it! heart.gif

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I noticed night before last you were approaching ...biggrin


So, you guys ... is the ballerina going clockwaise?

http://www.news.com.au/perthnow/story/0,21598,22492511-5005375,00.html

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I cried, "Oh, Lady Midnight, I fear that you grow old, the stars eat your body and the wind makes you cold." "If we cry now," she said, "it will just be ignored."

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my eyes are going in circles!!! nites!!


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ok, i just posted chapter 5 of my vampire storysmile.gif


Awesome!clap.gif

 



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and thanks again Lion for your help on it! heart.gif


you're welcome!aww

 



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