Well, and if you think about it, it's timed with another event. WHY did Sayid have the radio when Sarah walked up to her? IN my chappy he was fixing it for who ?
After I pay the bills, maybe I can get started on your story
I have been wanting to read for a long time. That's all I used to do. But too much commotion around here most of the time. Happy commotion, but noisy nonetheless
Ha! I didn't expect you to have read them! I figured you had enough with the dreamer stuff and everything. Thanks! This section has been kinda tricky because I wanted to preserve the actual stuff from the show as it was and still have Sarah there and work her stuff in. So, I figured, the whole black box zapper thing and the sturggle with her and Michael in the hatch worked well because it explains why he was stumbling out of the hatch, because he was after her.
Paints I'm really liking where you are going with your story. It's unique, but it's easy to get into the character. Great work, and I look forward to more. Also i know you are going to be making some changes to some of it, but it works well as it is.
BTW...for those that have been reading it. I'm a bit surprised that nobody has mentioned the blurbs that appear throughout the chapters. If you haven't realized it yet there is a reason they are there, and also they mean something every time they appear.
Snootch ! I'm so confused! There's random fiction posts and fan fiction posts in both threads!
Anyway, I have to be honest. I'm a little confused about the blurbs. It's gibberish with a word or two popping out. I'll be interested to see what it develops into. As I was saying in the other thread. It reminds me alot of A Beautiful Mind. With the secretive guy handing him an envelope and stuff.
What I'm going to say is ...... the next few, maybe several chappies are going to lead you to a reveal that is going to completely ROCK your world!!!!! You will NEVER see this coming!!! Get ready to be so blinded you're going to to come full around and see clear again!!!!
Lion you are right there are words in the blurbs of giberish. I put them there intentionaly. They only have two different patterns, and they say something about the things that are going on at that point in the story.
I cried, "Oh, Lady Midnight, I fear that you grow old, the stars eat your body and the wind makes you cold." "If we cry now," she said, "it will just be ignored."
LionQueen wrote: Snootch ! I'm so confused! There's random fiction posts and fan fiction posts in both threads!
Anyway, I have to be honest. I'm a little confused about the blurbs. It's gibberish with a word or two popping out. I'll be interested to see what it develops into. As I was saying in the other thread. It reminds me alot of A Beautiful Mind. With the secretive guy handing him an envelope and stuff.
it's not gibberish... there is a full sentince within each one... it is almost like what happens when you hear voices and it comes across jumbled...