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Desmond_Pen


We originally made you a pineapple fruit cake, but there was a slight accident. A very yummy accident.

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I like the aloneness of it. The one person narration. I also like the fact that I get free reading. I like to buy books because I like to own them.

Aisha was watching Beauty and the Beast- that Library Beast gives Belle- best gift anyone could have.

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Sir Snootch


"Gamers don't sleep. They just nap between levels."

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That is great. I love writing. But it's all because of the things I've read for years and years. the funny thing to me right now is you mentioned Steven King. Well I've never read 1 whole book of his. I've read almost all of "The Stand", but that's about the farthest I've gotten with his stuff.


To tell you the truth this is a very big stretch for me to write this style. I'm not normally into this kind of stuff as far as what I read. But my imagination has other plans for me right now.



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LionQueen


It Doesn't Matter Who We Were Before ...

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It reminds me alot of A Beautiful Mind.

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LionQueen


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I finally got through the first chapter of your book Paints. I'm slow going, but it takes me a while to adjust to the new world you've introduced us into. I like your descriptions. You're doing some nice work here!

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Sir Snootch


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LionQueen wrote:

It reminds me alot of A Beautiful Mind.

Thanks Lion. That makes me feel pretty good.

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LionQueen


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That movie really moved me. It was heartbreaking, frightening, touching and sad and inspiring all at once.

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Sir Snootch


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Well I'll be doing well if i can inspire two of those emotions through this.


That was a great show though.



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Sir Snootch


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Well chapter 4 of Dreamer is up now. This chapter isn't as graphic. I need to build some other stuff up.

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LOVED this... " My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die.”

Okay, is this three different guys here ? Or is this the same person ? Has an entity taken over the minds of the people like " It ? "

What is meant to be will be I guess........

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Sir Snootch


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Lion the first couple chapters did revolve pretty much around just one person, but now we are seeing more about other people in the story, and a bit about the town they live in. I have a much better sense of dirrection now after writing the 4th chapter.

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Desmond_Pen


We originally made you a pineapple fruit cake, but there was a slight accident. A very yummy accident.

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Very cool story, Kil!

I know it's not a vampire story, but I found that smilie.






-- Edited by Desmond_Pen at 03:43, 2007-01-20

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Sir Snootch


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KIL it would seem that someone has Final Fantasy on the brain.


I like it. more good work.



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Love is patient, love is kind, love is slowly going out of your mind.

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Question for all those who have read what I've posted in my book.  Do you think that the trial is redundant and unnecessary at the end of all three chapters?  Please be honest.  Thanks.

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I feel like I just found out that my favorite love song was written about a sandwich.


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LionQueen


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snootch2danootch wrote:

KIL it would seem that someone has Final Fantasy on the brain.


I like it. more good work.




I had wondered about that!

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Desmond_Pen wrote:

Very cool story, Kil!

I know it's not a vampire story, but I found that smilie.



-- Edited by Desmond_Pen at 03:02, 2006-10-27

thanks Des

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snootch2danootch wrote:


KIL it would seem that someone has Final Fantasy on the brain.


I like it. more good work.




just a little Final Fantasy on the brain


thanks Snootch



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hrslvr_paints


Love is patient, love is kind, love is slowly going out of your mind.

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As promised, the next chapter in my novel.  Rip this one apart because I know it's probably tediously long.  Also, are the trials at the end of the first three chapters redundant and unnecessary?



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hrslvr_paints


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And you now have the most recent finished chapter.  Six chapters in total are in that thread and I'm currently working on the seventh.

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hrslvr_paints


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I finished the seventh chapter, but it's really short so I think I'm going to work on it some more before I post it.

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hrslvr_paints


Love is patient, love is kind, love is slowly going out of your mind.

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OK, the next chapter has been posted.  It's still relatively short in comparsion to some of the other chapters, but whatever.

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